Great stuff!
very interesting story you tell me here Lone.
The organ intro was very interesting, have you considered reverbing it? I feel because this IS a church song, having it have a reverb sound, so that it sounds like its in a cathedral, would increase this songs power ten fold!
Also be careful how you use those bells, bells are effective when used sparingly, and when you make them play whole melodies like that, it can lose its effectiveness, and even ruin the melody to a lesser degree. I would recommend replacing the bells with tubelar bells. I know they sound the same, but they really don't, Tubelar bells are much quicker, and sound lighter. Maybe you did use them here, not sure what Acid has X_x.
The choir part was damn awesome, I enjoyed that to no end.
The piano crash ending, though probably not the best way to end the piece, was definatly an interesting twist ^^.
4/5 from me LoneInstrumentalist, keep them coming man ^^. I'll tell you all about VST's and why you should use them to up your music powers.