Impressive...
Hey General_Leo.
I decided to take a trip on down to your page, to see what you were up to. I feel you have alot of potential, and hearing this song, I have reaffirmed my initial thoughts.
The melodic line is really something else, I don't think i've ever really heard anything like it before.
That really fast flute trill playing in the background near the beginning of the snare segment, was quite fascinating. I realize that should it have been made louder, it may actually serve to create chaos in an otherwise fairly organized piece, so I am glad you kept it at the volume you did.
The piano's melody was what I refer to when I say it is really something else.
The flute near the beginning, before the snares, that was very pleasant also.
Lets think of some suggestions...
Well I don't think I heard spiccato strings, and I really think some short string stabs in the background playing along with melody, especially around that brass would have made it a tad bit more epic. Like for example, I felt that if you had spiccato strings instead of that piano melody when the snares came in, it may have served a great purpose, especially if you layered it with another octave of the same melody.
I swear there's a choir in there somewhere, but in the orderly chaos I cannot hear it properly, I hear it in the end when it's dying out with that piano, but I feel that is not nearly loud enough to give the song any real distinctive choir attribute.
Overall I am very very pleased with this piece General_Leo, I knew you had a flare for this kind of stuff, and it really showed through this piece. Great stuff.
easily a 5/5 from me, keep them coming!