Greatly improved
it has improved rather dramatically!
The vocal stabs as usual, were great, and was the rain more detailed in this piece?
it doesn't matter, here comes THE SAW!!!
*does the wave*
I am glad to hear it extended, truly now I have some time to live in it.
After the saw ended there was a second of silence, in my opinion, when a second of silence is introduced it generally means, BIG BANG HAPPENING, it didn't happen, that was okay of course, but that is the feel I felt I was going to get with that transition.
The strings, were very powerful, well done on that part.
And now HERE COMES BACK THE SAW!
And the thunder, wow! My suggestions for the thunder my friend, reverb reverb reverb! Give it a nice hallow and delay effect so it goes BOOM-OOm-oom-om.
The rain cuts out a bit too quickly, and suddenly.
Still great improvement, i'm glad you decided to finish it, I enjoyed it quite a bit.
5/5 from me Echo, keep them coming, i'll keep listening.