Excellent stuff!
I don't appreciate how you instantly assume DemonicScythe "needs help". That is none of your concern DJ_Cobalt. I personally think DemonicScythe is well on his way to becoming a very powerful artist, all I think he needs are some better samples, and he already has more skill in melodic work then you do.
His review was a few months ago, he has expanded like mad in those few months. You said yourself you've only used Fruity Loops for a month on November 25'th 2005, which would give you a glorious 4 months now (March 26th 2006), assuming you used it every single day.
Everybody has their own strengths and weaknesses.
I do agree that maybe ambiance was not the best place to put it, I would consider Classical, as you are using a fairly good amount of orchestral instruments.
I really liked your choir work Demonic, it sends a very sad, a very moving image, which I personally found to add whole new levels to the song. A nice simple percussional beat, I wonder though, if maybe the song would have benefited at not having them at all?
Nice bells in the background, I loved those bells, and still use them from time to time.
Nice strings. Have you considered reverbing them? It might give them a neater effect.
There are some distortion in the most active parts of the song Demonic, consider the compression effect to remove that distortion.
Like I said wonderful melody, great feeling.
I don't know if you should have had that single choir sing at the end, it would have been better to just fade it out.
5/5 from me DemonicScythe, keep them coming man.