Teh Awesome
I see you've added a whole new world of newness!
The story has changed oh so very dramatically, with all these new instruments, but for the better! I really like the strings in the background now, the ones going up and down really fast, wunderbar.
I like the fact you expanded the piano melody, definatly mixed it up a good bit.
The shakers add an interesting twist, though I don't know if twisters worked out that great, it just doesn't seem to flow with the song.
I was thinking, what would it sound like if you replaced those quick background strings with an organ? More darkness!
I'm going to find the bastard that voted 0 on this... they must DIE!
5/5 from me again Musical_Rocky, great stuff.