Good stuff.
The name was so amusing and the image I got from the piece combined.
its like an angry possessed Macintosh guy out to get ham or KILL EVERYBODY!
Look at him... walking down the meat section, a smile on his fact, a melody on his breath, with murder on his mind!
The beat was solid, a simplestic, however for your fourth loop, it's good. Everybody starts somewhere, you've got a good start.
keep them coming, one day you will be great.
Thanks for the review.
Very impressed!
ah classical stuff!!! This is WHERE I SHINE BABY!
Okay the xylaphone or bells you used in the back should resonate more in my opinion, they just plink, they should twinkle!!! Otherwise it sounds a bit out of place. Maybe replace that sound completely with a piano.
The strings were well utilized, I lovedored them, like my own children I will adopt one day.
The ending was a bit confusing. Too much going on too randomly.
I think a good solid brass going on the background would elevate the mood. Like have french horns, or the trombones playing long stretched notes in the background.
The strings going on with the flute (I think its the flute) worked very well in my opinion.
The swapping of instruments back and forth was also a good idea, it flows well.
Have you considered Orchestral hits in this piece? I can think of a few places that it would just ROCK to have.
Over zorgasmic stuff.
you've easily bypassed my expectations once again, *5'age from me*
The ending. Yup. The ending. I cry when I think of it. That was an automation and quantisational DISASTER. About half the notes are completely out of time, and the only reason it sounds almost slightly right is because of the overpowering brass I added to drown it out.
Yup, I'm critising myself...
Orch hits eh? I'll have to build a combinator for that, I've never tried to make one before but yes, that would work pretty well.
Quite impressed!
Hey, look at me, first time reviewing Khuskan's stuff... should I go all brutal... or all honest?
Honest.
T'was great.
The volume levels were what really did it for me, everything was PERFECTLY adjusted, the Equalizing can be said the same.
The melody was pretty good. The background beat was solid.
The Vox was friggen zorgasmic. Congratulations, you've become my techno idol!
Now for some suggestions.
uuuh... hmmm... errr... theres something I can comment on... I'M SURE OF IT!! I must put together all my weak techno knowledge!
Screw it, can't think of anything to improve on.
*5'age*
I'm getting my female vocalist to redo the vocals for me. Is that what you're looking for?
Impressive
I liked this theme, it sounds EXACTLY like something you'd hear in a music box, so swaying, so soft.
There is a bit too much resonance, but I figure this is because of the instrument.
Again, great loop, apox on those who scored it so low.
Neat.
This was quite complex and interesting to listen to. The melody was smooth and easy flowing, but seeing as where your inspiration came from, I can understand why so.
Keep them coming man, t'was excpetional.
*5'age*
Neat stuff.
I loved it!
I see you were using Sytrus, heh, I nenember when I used that left and right.
The melody was great, I loved it, though if you got some better VST's it would make it sound a lot better.
Great job though, 5/5 for the time spent on it.
Good planning.
Thank you muchly!
Yeah, I was kind of limited on what I could use, I don't have too many expansions on the programs I have, so my pallete is sadly rather limited....
Quite neat.
Its a very mean, cruel track, and I loved it! I listened to it like 10-15 times, before I realized that it was looping. What does this mean?
It means that the short loop was good enough to keep me absolutely entertained until after a good amount of time had passed.
Its simple, but extremely effective.
For a loop, its very good.
4/5 from me.
Hahaha...omg 15 times?...yeah its quite a loop...that was one nice review....i thank you greatly...im not sure if even i have listened thru it 15 times...well i guess i have...another pretty "extremely effective" tune is the Warrior Night tune...its pretty much the same style not as "army-like" though....thanx again...
Impressive
I especially enjoyed the strange and intoxinating melody. This is PERFECT for outside map music, extreeeemly well suited. I don't think i've encountered a piece more desirable for that kind of situation. Its soft, yet not too soft, constant and slow enough to keep the listener entertained, whilst refraining from being repetitive or boring.
A very difficult feat to pull off.
Keep them coming.
5/5
Great!
t'was so light and enjoyable ^^. It's like a fast paced ball dance music. The melody was quite nice and smooth.
I can see a violin in the background playing extended notes, however thats just my opinion.
I loved it, 5/5 for me.
It's been one hell of a ride guys, but it's time for me to leave. I will still be looking at my inbox, if you want me to look at songs, I will check back every once in a while. Take care Newgrounds! full_metal_slashemist@hotmail.com AIM: MaestroSorrow
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